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My heart…
Your hands…
My gamble…
I understand…
My fate…
Remains unknown…
My emotion…
Never shown…
My mind…
Wanders free…
My faith…
Terrifies me…
My story…
Endless guilt…
My fault…
Spilt milk…
My game…
Bets spread…
My rules…
Remain unsaid…
My religion…
Unanswered prayer…
My shame…
Conscience slayer…
My madness…
Inner fight…
My obsession…
Burning bright…
My trust…
Beaten drum…
My fears…
Never overcome…
My worries…
Not unfounded…
My crime…
Always surrounded…
My love…
Crushing blow…
My tears…
Never flow…
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©Eyewillnotcry1973
Inspired by the song “Don’t Cry” by Guns’N Roses
Thank you for sharing your gift. This is over flowing with powerful imagery! So much to consider!
Thank you Rick, very much appreciated – Cheers J
Amazing! And Guns and Roses, one of my all time favorites 😀
I really should use them more and I really should head over to your place for a catch up! Cheers J
Definitely should on both accounts 😉
My hope…
Of tomorrow…
My fears…
In marrow…
My word…
That I’m giving
My Love…
Is trembling…
Beautiful my friend – Guest Poet week is calling you! You know what to do – Cheers J
I love the very abrupt line lengths. encourages it to be a flow of thoughts instead of something precisely constructed.
I love that you love this! Thanks for stopping by to read and connect! Cheers J
Thank you for sharing your talent. I dabble in it but am not much of any good. I too enjoy the powerful imagery, thought provoking lines, and the hidden insight that lies beneath.
Thank you – much appreciated – Cheers J